All Comments on 'Hubby's Adventures 01'

by Operation_Balls

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billy2002billy200210 months ago

Interesting start, She's a bit of an easy girl, even for a story. Does he even know her name? Still I'm interested to know where this it's going. Is it his wife in the doorway?

LIDiverLIDiver10 months ago

A hot start. Bring on more!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Don't leave us hanging for long.

Dalton402Dalton40210 months ago

That last sentence notched it up a star. Was a little too fast paced. Maybe a bit more teasing

RTR10RTR1010 months ago

They don't exchange names, they don't discuss the ring on his finger or the age difference. No birth control discussed. No STD talk or prevention. Not much talking at all. I agree with the other comment that the girl seems a bit easy. But a good first chapter & I'll definitely read chapter 2. Curious about whoever is in the doorway. Wife? Roommate? Sister?

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