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ag2507ag2507about 4 years ago

One presumes that this is not the end and look forward to part 2 etc. etc. etc...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Intiguing!!!

Don't be too long in providing the next episode, please. I am intrigued at where this start to what is obviously intended to be a series of parts will lead.

Your characters are, as always, very real. I am sure that Lynne and Harry are destined for a few interesting discussions, perhaps even with Dr. Stoltz. I am sure they will get a more intimate introduction with the other members in this society.

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HStonerHStonerabout 4 years agoAuthor
First of A Series

There will, for good or ill, be more of the Humanity story. Chapter 2 is being written. The challenge, which I may fail, is to avoid simply following the pattern of my other series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very interesting

This reminds me of special ceremonies in higher societies to achieve an higher goal. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks

MimiRayMimiRayabout 4 years ago
Well Done!

I could see this vividly in my mind's eye. It was a beautiful image.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
HStoner you need an editor/proofreader.

Rowers row in sculls not skulls.

“Mon” and Dad’s?

Also “south western Germany” is quite a large area. I’d have liked a State named for clarification.

Cheers, Roger

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