All Comments on 'I Finally got my Mom after a Hike'

Extremely well written with perfect amount of progression. Would love to know how much mom suspected of the infatuation before the hike?

My mom knew before I truly did.

A desire, an opportunity, you grabbed it by the balls and tossed it off. A powerful story, well done

Great story please write the next part soon

hope you have more, get her feet in

5* read. I took have had the pleasure of my mam. Nothing can't beat the feeling. Hope we get to read a 2nd part.

the time he had. total looser

Nice story. Would have been nice to know why the mom was so receptive to his advances.

BRILL STORY,THX.

So wholesome!

Would have preferred some dialogue.

Nice story, details you gave had a ring of truth to them. Lots more details would have been much hotter though. We know nothing about what anyone looked like, not the author, the aunt or the mom. Not even anything as basic as what race everyone was. Details, details and more details are what makes a good story a scorcher! Thanks for your first story!

THAT'S how you write a wham bam thank u maam story.....i liked it! It woulda been hotter with a little more resistance but dang, she was DTF!

awesome, just right

I've read this story a few times and finally added it to favorites. Why have you quit writing? Thanks for your time though, I really liked the story.