by jessiefoxxx
One of the best stories that I have read on this site. Very detailed.
Entirely too much hetero sex for a story in this category. Made it very hard for me to get past the first six pages or so.
This might have fit better in a general category then just lesbian. However the rest was well done. Thank you
I read two pages and did not see any pronouns except He, Him, and His. Maybe you actually wrote a hetero story and don't now the difference.
This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. It had a little bit of everything within it. I enjoyed all of the sex but also the writing as well. I laughed and cried and smiled throughout. The only thing, and I know it was about Jessie, but I would have enjoyed a little more about the interaction between her and Jackie's kids.
My sincere condolences to everyone for the loss of what sounded like a wonderfully complex woman. May Jessie R.I.P.
Becky
For someone as apparently educated as she claims there are an awful lot of simple spelling mistakes (even lawyers can use spellcheckers) and several screw ups with names. And it was long and really needed editing to reduce the amount of duplication. Not that it wasn't a good read, but it did get very familiar when rereading an antic that had already been told a few chapters previously.
The tale about the husband sucking another man for his wife actually happened to me, but having done it for my wife's pleasure she then began to have second thoughts, threw me out of our home within a week and divorced me for having a gay affair within our marriage - despite the fact that it was on a single occasion at her behest with her present.
But I do not believe this is autobiographical, just fictional.