All Comments on 'I'll Show You Mine If... Ch. 05'

Reading the last part of the story has me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment! I love your stories!

Well done and humorous, too. Lets have more.

All i can say is i want more!!!!!

This was a very hot chapter and am really looking. Forward to the next one as I see things really heating up between these two from here on. I knew he wasn't going to give up his cherry to Diane.

I'm sure that it will eventually come to them that they love each other to the point that they don't want to be with anyone else.

This is only getting BETTER with each chapter, continue!!!

Absolutely well written; love it and can't wait for more!

This story just gets better with every chapter...you're teasing me, and I love it...write faster I want to read more about Kris and Rob... this story is excellent... I see a great relationship forming here :-D

Looking forward to more of the story.

he is a spineless idiot by allowing diane in his room and fooling around with her he just proves that he doesn't really care about kris and the part after in the kitchen was just as bad instead of being mad at kris for arrainging for diane to come over he makes up with her so unrealistic it made me want to puke the guy hasn't got the guts to back up his own words he is a total waste of space and the writer keeps rushing things all that happened in this chapter should have taken place over several months not one day a real guy would have not let diane into his room and found a way to stay home from the trip then when they all came back he would tell them he was going to a different college then avoid kris the rest of his life keep it realistic please

Awesome work!

And exciting.

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GREAT IDEA

I have to admit, there have been somethings about this tale I didn't like. That being said I like where this is going. I hope they finally give in and are truly together even though I don't consider 'step' or 'In-laws' as incest myself it is still a good love story. I want to know how it finishes.

So, I see I am going to be the most recent posting about this story, the next closest one being (4) years ago...what a shame, no others have read and posted about this series.

I AM going to finish the series...too invested in it not to, up to this point.

Diane's visit, while certainly a surprise, DOES NOT reflect badly on Rob; he obviously Still has greater feelings for Kris than he does for anybody else! He DID NOT just jump on Diane and ravage her, while giving up his virginity; they "may have" gotten each other off, given a bit more time together, but her dad showing up like that put the kabosh on that REAL FAST!!

AND, given that Kris told Rob that "I wasn't in the mood' to play with Susan and Michelle, even though she obviously got REALLY REVVED UP by watching them, says that her DEVOTION to Rob is in place, and will lead to their being intimate with each other...by 'intimate', you KNOW I mean they will engage in sexual intercourse, and it will be TOTALLY AMAZING for both of them, cementing their relationship forever.

IF they were to include any others, it would be 'peripherally', as it were; a harem, maybe, but Kris would ALWAYS be Rob's primary focus as far as a mate and love-of-his-life...as she would feel for him!!

As far a Rob's mother, and involving her...that will remain to be seen; I, for one, am NOT OPPOSED to that kind of relationship. Keeping it in the family, available and loving, is agreeable for me. (Also, I know some would scream about Dad being 'cuckolded', and the 'cheating' aspect of Mom's involvement; I address this just as a reader having seen these comments before on other stories...inappropriate as they are...if it is to come about, I am just saying that I am OKAY with it...!!)

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