All Comments on 'Illicit Desires Ch. 01'

quite sensitively written as usual but as they say

"where's the meat?"

I just broke up the story into 4 parts and you really have to read all of them to get to the "meat" - as you put it! My previous story "Breaking Barriers" ran to several pages so I thought this was a better way...

do i need to even tell you how wonderful it is to read your stories. where is the sequel to the temple episode and am waiting eagerly for the other 3 parts of this one too!!! happy writing

Thanks for your response. Wonderful story telling. But the parts are small. No serious cavil.

I fear I concluded long back(with my little familiarity with a few Indian languages) that you are most likely to be of the "metallic caste" (as the metal is called in Sanskrit,Tamil or some others). No response needed. May God bless you

Nice !