All Comments on 'I'm So Drunk Right Now...'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nicely written...

... but a bit too short ;)

Nevertheless, keep writing, I really enjoyed it !

Just be careful, there are a few typing errors.

BurtschoderBurtschoderover 8 years ago
I like this

Good story!

RedRamRedRamover 8 years ago
Well done!

great story

Mojo648Mojo648about 2 years ago

It's better, more of a realistic storyline that you could imagine in your mind as you read it, I liked it, still needs more chapters, well done.

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