All Comments on 'In The Groove'

by SilkenLace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ExtraHot!!!

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Very believable - made me <i>very</i> wet...xx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Seduction Story

Very well written. I enjoy seduction stories and there are not enough of them in my opinion. This is, by far, one of the better ones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot or what?

My pussy is absolutely DRIPPING! Absolutely loved it! Please, please keep writing ... I beg you! x

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I was really enjoying this story until...

You called her clitoris a "female penis". The clitoris is NOTHING like a penis, period, not in any way, shape, or form. As a lesbian, I felt insulted with that comparison, just as a man would be if you compared any part of his intimate body anatomy with a woman's. Have you ever heard of the Vagina Monologues? The clitoris is unique, one of a kind, and should be celebrated as such by women, not as some sort of stunted male part, which it is not. End of tirade.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great first page!

I have a friend who read the first page and loved it. My friend wanted to leave the conclusion to the imagination.

photon100photon100almost 14 years ago
Nice story!

As are all of your pieces. Thanks!

baronearthbaronearthover 12 years ago

great story very sexy - lets have more soon

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Highly erotic & yet very romantic. A must read!

O2O2almost 11 years ago
Nice read!

I enjoyed the slow build up. Thank you.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 10 years ago
Verrrry nice.

This was a fully believable and very well told story. I loved the tension built up in Judith, and the way her friend (and Mel, well, sort of) protected her. Mel is quite the matchmaker, eh?

The seduction in Judith's place was soooo smooth, and done with such genuine caring and lust. I haven't checked your other submissions, but if you have not yet done the next morning, I hope you do. Also, I hope you let Brenda in on the scene. She seemed to be holding a torch for Judith. In any event, you should write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Wow! Juicy story indeed.

FranceskaRFranceskaRover 6 years ago
Music !

The Legend of 1900....

VERY VERY GOOD !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Your best story

I have thoroughly enjoyed all your stories. All beautifully written and highly erotic in a sapphic sense. But this story about Judith is my favorite. Love it.

Cupertino345Cupertino345over 1 year ago

I loved it! Starts slowly but never boring. I knew what the story was about but I was still surprised at the path it took. Great job! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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