All Comments on 'Incest Hotel Ch. 01'

by RelentlessOnanism

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This is very good. Please continue writing more chapters.

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very yummy story!

A very good opening chapter! I'm looking forward to see where you take this story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Finish the story

Finish the story of three hotel. You have to have descendents purchase it back, and ultimately finds out about their ancestors buried there, and break the cycle.

WhenIWasYoung15WhenIWasYoung15over 4 years ago

I understand not all of these stories have a happy ending (no pun intended) but to have both of them end in such tragedy, at least for me, was sad. Well written because it did provoke emotions but I could only give it 4 stars. With that said, I will continue to read other chapters if you decide to write more, and I'm hopping you do. I did add this to my favorites and add you to my favorite authors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So good!

Refreshingly good content from an author who is actually British! I stumbled across your account after searching for themes similar to the ones you write about, Mums with big tits. Excellent content and I look forward to now reading your story about the British government.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago

The start was too long. Why go into old generations in such depth and for so long.

cslt1cslt1over 4 years ago
Great story!

5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More!!

Would love to see the illustrated version of this! What a hot milf! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What is this Legend of the Seeker

The spirit of her mom and brother

Consumating forbidden love

The story in is still good though

KomjatiusKomjatiusover 3 years ago

You are a really talented writer. The story, and not only the erotic elements, is wonderful. I think this story is the best I read here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Author has skills -- and he knows how to use them!

Jutah3995Jutah3995over 1 year ago

Damn I don't think Stephen king has got any better reads than you. This story out of the many I have read a

Jutah3995Jutah3995over 1 year ago

About on this site absolutely had drawn me into it like I was standing on the outside looking in and witnessing the whole affair. What a magnetizing story.. getting ready to read the next chapter..5strong 🌟

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