All Comments on 'Indian Incest: All Are Involved Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmm.................

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh man.. can't wait 4 long..... always drooling to read more n more ...... nice story... bt hv to wait 4 a day long to get next part.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
where is family

pleas involve more family sex alongwith this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hi, Your story theme is good - and so far your portrayal of threesome sex between two males and 1 female is good - though could be more descriptive. However, your story could do with a tighter editing and more importantly, the usage of English language. We are not reading literature - granted - but still the language has to be correct. Presently, regret to say, it is not so.

I look forward to further developments in your story.

doindiadoindiaalmost 13 years agoAuthor
All are Welcome !!! Comments live stories ....

Dear Commentators !

I love to thanks about all yours comments on this story,

Keep reading and Comment also, More parts are under approval, and soon they are here 4 your pleasure.

Do love U all,

Yours,

doindia

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