All Comments on 'Indian Mom: The Lesson'

by manwar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great story.. liked it...

u should continue this story further...

Son & Mom Incest + Anal is a deadly combination...

Great story...

momloversmomloversabout 15 years ago
greattt

u r doing well keep it up my id dirtymom@rediffmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
women buttock

buttock is the treasure of women. buttock is the most sensual part of women body then other. women buttock is like the door of paradise and anus is the tunnel of heaven.

good hot story, but son should get the chance to lick moms anus with tongue. only indian mother have true maternal and sensual beauty.

shang40shang40over 10 years ago
Lusty Mom

Ass fucking is always great with Mom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
VERY, VERY EROTIC - DESERVES MORE THAN 5 STARS BUT RULES ALLOW 5 STARS TOPS (5.0/5.0 = 100% = A+ & on a special Dean's List)

A very well written story, highly erotically charged.

A perfect jack-off fantasy.

I was imagining that was touching my own mother's belly, boobs, pussy & ass.

To manwar: THANK YOU!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5*

I am 66 now.

Had this happened to me i would have thought i was dead & had gone to Heaven.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
OMG! His mom is a dream come true! ☆☆☆☆☆

THIS STORY IS EXCELLENT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Okay, I guess

But if it's the first time with his mother, why doesn't the kid do what lots and lots of boys'd given anything to do to their moms--fuck her up her warm wet ever-loving cunt? No pain for mom just pleasure and more satisfaction for the boy in blowing his balls up the same hairy hole he came out of.

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 8 years ago
What a shame

Your first two chapters to this story were brilliant WHY didn't you finish this amazing story. It's be seven years since you wrote this chapter unfortunately for us poor readers you have no intentions of finishing it. What a crying shame.this was another 5 star chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
MANWAR, THANK YOU FOR THIS EXCELLENT STORY! 5 STARS EASY

I liked it very much.

Mom's character reminded me of my mother, ass & boobs in particular.

My mom was also rather tall by Canadian standards of the day: five feet eight & 3/4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This is an AMAZING story! As I eas reading the story i was imagining my mom's bum.

Very well written. Brilliantly conceived scenario.

I gave this story 5 stars!

manwar is a very very good writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fantastic! Don't stop

Write an episode where mom and maid are kissing and caressing each other. Then mom comes and stands astride your face (you're on a narrow cot touching yourself) . She lowers her cunt to your face to lick her while she's twirling your nipples, sending electric shocks to your body. The maid licks your cock, then slowly lowers herself onto your manhood. All 3 if you languidly make love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5). Very erotic! Realistic. Romantic in its own way.

Thank you for this story.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This two-part series on Indian Mom is a brilliant essay in erotica. It vividly captures the two sides of a woman. The first part makes an evocative portrayal of the Mother's Lesbian side, as the Maid helps her attain an explosive orgasm. The second part showcases her heterosexual part, as she willingly allows her Son to reach orgasm, even as she reaches orgasm with accompanying pain and pleasure of anal intercourse, which is rare and erotic, when done to a woman.

It is both erotic and romantic and arouses and captures the imagination and passion of the reader. Kudos to the Author.

A third part is eminently possible, showing the son enter his mother frontal, which would be the fitting finale to Mother-Son consummation of passion. Ramesh69691@outlook.com

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