All Comments on 'Indian Wife's Humiliation Day Pt. 01'

Continue please

Nice way to start your account. Just a small advice, shorten up your paragraphs because readers don't like reading long paragraphs. And put each dialogue in a separate para. Like-

Archana's voice startled me should end there and the next para you should start with

"Why are you... "

"Arey remove your pyjamas.. " it should be in another para.

Again the para, My fantasies.., is a huge one,

I think you will improve with your next part, which I will duly wait for. All the best. Keep writing.

Beautiful! All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.