All Comments on 'Instruction Ch. 04'

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master_dillonmaster_dillonabout 19 years ago
More, please MORE

Please, please continue this story line. I'm horny and want to read MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
More Please! Give US more!

Love it. More. More. More. More x 3 = three VOTES

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
finally...

finally get a taste!!

LOL ...

I have you thinking now don't I <WINK>

kisses babe,

love ya...

T

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Licks

Have mom's catch them and then join in

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 19 years ago
You go girl!

Keep on keeping on. More.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Kickass.

I'd like to see some of the same with exhibitionist/voyeur stuffs!

slppbeautyslppbeautyabout 19 years ago
Yeah Baby!! Keep it going

Add to this. I look forward to reading your submissions. Each day there is something new. You're doing a great job!

thoiblushthoiblushabout 19 years ago
keep going

I enjoy reading your stories and would love to read what happens next.

naughtysoftballgrlnaughtysoftballgrlabout 19 years ago
Keep it comming!

Great stories. Keep writing. Maybe try something with a strap-on or a male family member.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
awesome

just amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great story!

That was a great story. I hope that Becky and Erica have some more adventures, but only with women. (I don't like to read stories with men in them.) Incidentally, I have no objection to incest, as long as it's kept in the family.

David48David48over 18 years ago
Being "teacher"

No position is more fulfilling than that of the instructor/teacher. If done right, knowledge becomes the power it was always meant to be. At the age of eighteen, I was the recipient of just such an instruction. She was 35. I learned, hands on, how to truly pleasure a woman. I later became the "master" as I awakened my own very young, very new bride, to the awesome sex hungry lioness inside her. The greatest sadness is knowing so few of us experience this at all. More please! Maybe discovering her own "bi-ness"?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Yes, more please

Please continue with these girls, you have established a good base and now are ready to "take off".

moonmistressmoonmistressabout 18 years ago
loved it

this was a great story line.i would like to see where it leads.

Richard49Richard49almost 18 years ago
Wonderful

I would like to read more of these two

you have done a wonderful job of making these stories real

Richard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More Please

that was great

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
keep the story rolling

It's a great story and i really want to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
as always

i just so love yoru writings i always have, i have been away for awhile so i had not had the luxury of reading this series until now, please continue this in anyway your sexy assed self can.

a loyal fan

in lust with your mind

domthesub@yahoo.ca

bantombantomalmost 16 years ago
loved the story

ending here would be good i think

if you continue though, strap ons are good =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
please

please make more this is a great story and you are probably the best writer on this site

nearlynymphonearlynymphoover 14 years ago
more

seriously hot you have to continue this story! make erica learn how to play with toys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Your getting hotter...

Since they are at the beach, you should introduce some guys into taking her virginity and maybe some toys as well as an orgy. Those pussies are to hot to stop now!

fishingrod48fishingrod48about 13 years ago
Great Start

Its a great start love the slow building of tension please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORIES!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

more please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WOW

Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More Incest is Key to this story

One of them has to have a naughty brother they can involve in there love affair id love to see that or even a mother and/father!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More PLEASE!!!!

You have received plenty of feedback asking to keep this story going. Please do so! You are hands down the best writer on this site! Please keep the stories coming. You definitely keep me cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good stuff

It's almost a shame bring in men when Becky could really turn rougher and more dominant with Erika.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE

Please more :) <3 it

and the brother idea is good

dadischdadischover 10 years ago
super little story

I loved this stort of a lovely innocent girl being introduced to lesbian sex by her cousin. I am very much into lesbian stories & it would be very nice to read of the girls bringing other female friends into the equation. Perhaps even a little domination from a slightly older woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More

Would like to read more you do some awesome stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yes

i would love more, but keep it all girl and family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Yes!!!

Bring on the toys and boys.

Randee1958Randee1958almost 8 years ago
No opinion.

I am only interested in girl on girl. So that's why I'm not voting. Although I will rate these 4 chapters. All 5💥's

afordmanafordmanover 7 years ago
More please

Great adventure, boys, toys, moms, dads, other cousins. It will be great.

maxsteelemaxsteelealmost 6 years ago
More please

I would love to see this continued. Please continue this story please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it; please continue the adventure

Best story i’ve read in years! Wonderful decriptions and interactions. Thank you so much, hope to read more soon.

RougeAgentRougeAgent2 months ago

Angel, you teased us by letting us know Becky had brought toys along, so they need to be put to good use. Don't bring any boys in until Becky has deflowered Erica, because that would be so hot!

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