All Comments on 'Intervention'

by Giveandgetoral

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Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69about 5 years ago
Love the Oral Assault

My favorite thing to do is making love to a nice wet pussy with my mouth!

Bi47Bi47about 5 years ago
Very good

Turn bad in beginning but in the end great. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Stereotypical bull

Pot is not a gateway drug....Cartels don't run Oxy and pills in the U.S....$75 a week habit is not a habit or an addict...like two pills a week...she was a Hopkinton for $75 a week...just work a shit job...be an actual addict...no one sent her to rehab before the DEA nonsense...and Oxy withdrawal is over within a week with some issues lasting a month...mostly psychological....then gets out of rehab to start an illegal relationship? So he wants her to relapse?

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 5 years ago
Good and Bad

I gave it a three. The story was trite--nothing original at all except for the uncle's part. In the beginning, the correct word is "prospective," not "perspective." And the ending is also trite--I've read that same sentiment to end a story dozens of times. The sex was pretty good, but too short.

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