by bloodsugarsxmagic
This was one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica. I loved the back and forth between them - inside each of their thoughts - very hot. I hope there will be more chapters!!
cute variation on the "schoolgirl" theme. Extremely well written. Good "graphics" I wouldn't call this "bdsm" I would probably put it into the "erotic coupling" or "fetish" category. Definitely worth the reading. Well worth the time spent reading
... like 'Potter Mints, the Hotter Mints'! A marvellous story! Thank you for bringing it to us; I would love to read more.
Five stars and my sincere thanks, bsm - an my apologies for truncating your name - I don't have all night ;) !
This is a reprint of a story posted by someone else.
It was titled "The Good Girl and the Sex Shop"
It's my understanding that the original story was removed a while ago and that bloodsugarsxmagic was the co-author of that story.
Please right a sequel! Would love to follow this girls degredation. Perhaps she could develop a thing for older men ordering her about?
I have read more than 1600 on the stories on this sight and I want to say that, out of ALL of them, this one is my very favorite. Everything about it, from the girl, and her circumstances, to your writing style (I hate fake "writers" who can't follow the simplest of grammar mechanics). The only thing I would change personally is the mans age but that's only because I'm young and it is really very easy to just imagine myself in his place so that really isn't an issue. Thank you SO much for this AMAZING story! I hope you write a sequel!!!
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The detail in this was concise and expertly written. I enjoyed reading this and want to read more of your work!
Your story was really good. I thought it was well written and it kept my interest from beginning to end. I wanted to be Alison!
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OH SHIT THAT WAS HOT!!!!!