All Comments on 'Intrigue Among the Pyramids'

This is a good start, and I like the attention to detail and character development.

Please continue.

I very much enjoy how you paint with words, so vivid. Thank you for sharing your creativity, it was a pleasure to read. I look forward to reading more!

With this beginning, with these two characters, this story could be a great one. So well done. Bravos.