All Comments on 'Invisible Ch. 01'

Loved it, please continue.

Can't wait for chapter 2

The invisibility serum needs a bit of suspension of disbelief, but as long as it leads to a good plot, I don't mind.

I was going to object to his lack of backbone once discovered, but it actually makes sense - Carrie is older/experienced and he's more like a bookworm.

Why did she choose her brother? Is it just the kink (and if so, did she always want that?) or is there more? I hope it gets explained.

I'm also curious what perversions his sister can come up with, you did a good job of highlighting Carrie's courage and desire, be as creative as you like. Looking forward to more.

A very different but interesting story !! I think the kinky sex with brother and sister is great and I think his sister really wants him for herself. The kinky stuff is to get back at the parents or feed her fetish ?? I hope they keep banging each other and her brother now uses his invisible formula to screw her well and very often when she least expects it !! Please keep more chapters coming. Thank you.

I normally do not care for the invisable type story but this one got me turned on and I want o read another chapter or two. Please let me know if you write and post more of this story, please.

Well worth continuing, maybe let their mom catch them when she is unable to do anything to stop them, all she can do is watch.

The story is awesome, I'd love to read more chapters on it. Please continue on with this story.

Follow up?

Please write another chapter of this story. It's great on many levels.