All Comments on 'It's a Thin Line...'

I can't wait for subsequent chapters.

This story was kind of hot but I was really put off by how judgmental everyone was. With all the appalling looks of disgust going back and forth and everyone being shocked and disgusted with every new action, I am surprised that these people made it beyond a raunchy comment before they went their separate ways vowing to never talk to the others again.

Agree with previous comment. You spread it too thick with bits of negative reactions. It was difficult to enjoy the sex when waiting for the knock-down drag-out fight to start. Even the 'we're okay' conversations used what was supposed to be dirty talk but came across dangerously negative. The sex writing was fine. The emotional writing brings to mind it's all fun and games until it isn't. Oh, between page one and two, Kevin went from boyfriend to husband.

I could really see how deeply and happily someone could be a cuck. You might teach Imstillfun a lot.

I just have to ask...Why are these four people even in the same room together, let alone having sex? It reads like self-flagellation or something. Kind of interesting, a little fun, but very strange character development choices right from the opening paragraphs.

Brilliant story had similar with my ex wife many years ago. I got her to dress erotically and eventually a couple of different guys got to have her fully. I was never present although so enjoyed her when she got home from her dates with then. So enjoyed this story for the memories for me. Well written thank you.

Agree with another commenter. Kevin went from boyfriend to husband. Also, where was the BDSM? Should have been in Loving Wives.

Certainly, a different cuck story, well written and vivid scenes.