All Comments on 'It's Raining Men Pt. 02'

Chrissy

You have a wonderful way of delivering a story. You have a character who has sex with multiple partners in a span of time that is at once an exciting revelation and yet delivered with a bit of tongue in cheek recall that somehow adds to the overall sensuality of the story. I love the way you rated your lovers , all fun, all structure, etc. While it looks like the Rain is over, I for one hope to see more of your delightful approach to writing. Top marks for you! Thanks - Kevin

I enjoy the way you have of delivering the story. Laughed out loud at several points at some of her descriptions. Absolutely wonderful story of sexual discovery. It shows how we are formed by societal norms, whether good or bad and it's okay to step outside of them as we figure out who we are and what personally works for us. Excellent and very well done. Can't wait for more from you.

I love these tales....you are so matter of fact and yet you have feelings....clever writing...does this end mean 'The End'? I hope not! If it is..thankyou for the ride...

about your feelings which resonate with me. Fearless emotional honesty on Lit is so rare. Another five from me XX

Nice construction on this story, as well as erotic.

Really enjoyed all of this little yarn. Found it very different to the run of the mill erotica here (don't get me wrong, l enjoy nearly all that I read). This was more of an insight for me on how a woman thinks of and how she approaches sex and intimacy. And blokes too. Yep, really good. Will have to read more of your work to see if it all enlightening. Thank you

Regards

Medicalpete

Good evening Christine,

I just finished reading the two chapters and found them very enjoyable. You have many stories that I will enjoy as time goes by.

There is a slight touch of humor to this story which I like. I don't know if that was intentionally or if thats just the way you write, in either case I loved it. I've read several stories here where they are advertised as "humorous" They don't know humor if that got whacked in the head with it. But you did a good job with it.

I also like the way you tell your story, like you're having so much fun with it, and at the same time you're very serious about your characters and who they are. You've given the minor characters nearly as much character as the major ones. A lot of people will go so far as to not even give the minor characters a name.

Thus I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.

Excellent writing, thank you!

Ted