All Comments on 'Jacqueline & Diane'

Finally! Someone who can write a story about intimacy between two women. Absolutely beautifully done!

this was truly stunning! enough said.. thanku xxx

Hi, What a refreshing change to read about two woman who grow accustomed to each other before exploring each other; rather than the short preamble before loveless rabid sex.

What a fantastic sight it would be to see two women dressed like that enjoying themselves

Love Menderman

Believable, soft and sensual, with excellent spelling, proper grammar and realistic content, and erotic as hell but not inanely so.

Thanks for taking the time and putting forth the effort to create this wondrous piece of erotica!

Very intimate, sensually, slow-growing story of lesbian lust it has been my pleasure to read!! I write along these same lines, is why it attracted me so much. Every move, every compliment, every kiss was out of pure desire. And yes, spike heels and nail touching do make a diff!! This story kept me on the edge of my seat the whole read, My kind of story!!

I applaude your efforts!! You take lust to a new level!!

100 PLUS!!!!!!

I loved the short story of the two women. T wish there were more stories of just women. i am myself a bi-female. The touch of a woman's is the most sensual touch I have ever felt. I love to feel a woman's tits and the softness of her body and pussy. It is so exciting!! I LOVED IT!!!!

I will give you the best compliment you can receive from a man as I read this story. I got a hard on!!! Very erotic, very sexy, VERY BELIEVABLE!!! Great story.

OMFG wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

The way you wrote this was amazing. I got aroused several times while reading it.

The very best!!!

Wonderful slow seduction, and I like how she wasn't just being seduced into sex, it was also into a sexier lifestyle with the heels and the garter and everything =) Loved it!

Just an incredible story. Well written. How can I get a job with Diane & Jackie

For a man who really love Lesbians Texts, this one is for me the best i ever read!!! it takes 4 pages but for me it's like only one. Now, i 'll read all of this one.

This is just a magnificent sensual story of the awakening of a beautiful innocent young woman’s suppressed desire to experience the sexual touch of another woman. Her confident and sexually desirable supervisor slowly and lovingly nurtures her hidden passion. The lust and sexual tension gradually builds, as her intellect and body are prepared for her eventual sexual submission.

Diane engages in intense foreplay and slowly undresses Jackie in a sensuous and incredibly erotic passage. Jackie’s sexually excited body, hungrily responds to every kiss and caress of her skilled seducer. Diane continues to tease and allow Jackie’s desire and anticipation to mount; gently rubbing her silky lingerie, asking her to leave her heels on, lightly stimulating her erect nipples, kissing her nylon-clad thighs and fingering her wet panties.

It is a beautifully written and extremely literate story. An incredible turn-on, that is impossible to read without longing to surrender yourself to Diane.

I loved the story.

I love stories like this. The writer has an incredible feel for people, women, and writing. And i soooooo love the the gradual seduction; for a seduction of one of the really great themes in life; the seduction of ones' heart and soul. And with love and tenderness.

Your story resonates perfectly with my fantasies. I love first person POV. Someone should make video like this!

..wonderfully sensuous, oh so seductive.

hmm you sure have a way with words.

How wonderful it was read a story about two women that were deeply in love! Everyone has different tastes and what turns me on may not turn someone else on. However, there are so many stories on this site that are about domination, control, humiliation, making some one your slave and the like that it was refreshing to read a love story.

You did a great job on this story and I am saddened to see you haven't written in years. It is the author's story and you can write anyway you want. But my only two thoughts would be (1) Jackie did not initially have oral sex with Diane because she "in someway was not ready: I wasn't sure I could do it". I would have liked there to be a segment where Jackie goes down on Diane and what her thoughts and feelings were about giving her lover pleasure. (2) I thought the last paragraph was out of character for Jackie. All of the story was about her love for Diane but in the last paragraph she is thinking about making love to some other women.

Thanks for the story

I am a transvestite and love to dress as a woman. I am happily married and my wife enjoys my dressing up and pretending. I found this story and read it by myself. I loved it so much that I wanted to share it with my wife. As I was reading it aloud to her, she stopped me and said " I want you dressed as a woman before you read any more!" Well, I couldn't believe her encouragement and promptly went to my closet and picked out my sexiest outfit. I put on my black lace nightie, black seamed stockings and my 5 inch black stiletto pumps. I returned to the bedroom and I began reading the story to her and she became very excited. With out going into detail, it was one of the best nights of sex I have ever experienced! Thanks so much for such a great "arousal building" story! I look forward to more from Heelslover...

Nice story! Terrible choice of tags ...