All Comments on 'Jenny and Henry Pt. 01'

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Gym52Gym52about 1 year ago

A great storyline,unfortunately spoiled by a lack of proofreading and editing, it appears that by page three someone had become bored.

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I love writing my fantasies of public nudity and humiliation. My stories are a slow burn.