All Comments on 'Jerri Ch. 01'

by Franco Pauli

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Phenomenal!

Wow - what a GREAT read! Lots of buildup and you can do so much with this premise. More, more, more, please!!!

Thanks for sharing

MyVinnyMyVinnyalmost 16 years ago
great

waiting for more!

mBrowmBrowalmost 16 years ago
discrete distance ?

"they had kept a friendly and discrete distance" ? Why? Were they doing advanced math? Make it "discreet distance," please! But otherwise, it's a very nice, hot story. Looking forward to more!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
This is a good start

She has a secret lover and I think that's kinky that the guy knows and she doesn't.

Thanks for the chapter

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

I think this would fit better (no pun) in non -consent because this is a rape.

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