by MALIBUMAN666
I totally respect other people's right to say a story of mine is crap, I know it isn't my best work... but what always confuses me is why people carry on reading something they think sucks. This is part four, it makes no sense to me.
I love your work, just don't get why the haters keep reading. Please don;t be discouraged! 5 from me!
It seems like a really good editor could help. This just isn't interesting anymore.