by E.Z.Riter
Unbelievably good story.
Tremendously intriguing storyline.
The author has made his readers/me believe that Jack can take on all three women --- indeed, that for him, it will take all three.
Extremely well written.
For any story.
Especially so for an amateur story on a free site.
This is so far into the troposphere above most Literotica stories that they look small (if they can be seen at all).
It has gripped me.
I'm eagerly anticipating Ch. 02.
Paul in Oklahoma
PS.
What? 17 years with NO comments?
Nothing to complain about?
How about just recognition where due with a couple of words to say, "It's great" ?