All Comments on 'Jim Cox's Summer of Sex Ch. 01'

The vixen's name started as Jane and turned to Jean... great story but that was distracting.

Great, sexy read. Hope you keep the story going!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Please decide between Jane and Jean though. Otherwise great read

one of these writers need to report these personal ads in the comment section as for the story hope to see net chapter soon

Great story, I'm ready for chapter 2 I hope it comes soon.

i gave it 5 stars. not sure where its headed..... but i'm waiting for chapter 2!

Excited for chapter 2. Well written

There are nust too many facets going all at once.

Aunt Jane changed to Jean when Sophie showed up. Simple typo, but simple editing would have caught it and less confusing.

Another confusing point was Karl the owner of the lumber yard or was he only the son of the owner and in school with Bill and Jane at the tine she shagged him?

Slipped a change of husbands between Sophie and Jane a couple times in first meeting.

Simple editing mistakes, just get a second set of eyes to check over before posting the next great chapters. Look forward to the twisted tale this may become.

Please continue

I'm giving this one three stars because I really don't like where it's headed now. If the second one is bad I'm bailing out on this series.

if this is going where it seems to be. I'm bailing as well.

Will have a look at the next chapter but not sure. Went from 5 stars to one for me.

I liked the way it started better than when the thugs turned up - but we shall see what comes next.

Wussy guy, horny bossy wives who can't seem to keep their mouth shut and WHAT! I'm outta here.

Romy and Dee not needed nor wanted unless they get killed off quickly.