All Comments on 'Jimmy meets Miss Victoria'

by Rocytman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A very sexy tale of first time submission

I normally dont read the First Time stories, and I'm so glad I did. Your story was worth the time and effort, please continue with more...Marlene

tracysatintracysatinover 15 years ago
Please continue

Please continue with this story it is so very erotic.

mBrowmBrowover 15 years ago
Grand Start!

Congratulations! Very hot story, well written. Maybe you'll give us more?

billc393billc393over 15 years ago
Excellent 1st effort!

I really enjoyed this story! I often wish I'd met a woman like this when I was that age. It took me another 20+ years to find a woman who was interested in Dominating me...<br><br>It was worth the wait though!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good

very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please don't tell me this is it, I need more!!!

I think the subject says it all. It has been too long, please add another chapter.

HardXsRHereHardXsRHereover 5 years ago
fantastic story

really got me HARD and HORNY

gave the author a big 5. Need To

Read More.

ekim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good premise.

The beginning was good. Nice, drawn out anticipation. But once he got naked it was BOOM. Boom blow job. Boom pussy eating. No slow buildup. No discussion about what she wanted him to do with his mouth. No slow handjob edging of his cock. No discussion about his masturbation fantasies -- What did he think about, Whom did he think about? Did he watch porn? What kinds? What were his favorite genres?

Three stars.

Anonymous
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