by Rocytman
I normally dont read the First Time stories, and I'm so glad I did. Your story was worth the time and effort, please continue with more...Marlene
Congratulations! Very hot story, well written. Maybe you'll give us more?
I really enjoyed this story! I often wish I'd met a woman like this when I was that age. It took me another 20+ years to find a woman who was interested in Dominating me...<br><br>It was worth the wait though!!
I think the subject says it all. It has been too long, please add another chapter.
really got me HARD and HORNY
gave the author a big 5. Need To
Read More.
ekim
Good premise.
The beginning was good. Nice, drawn out anticipation. But once he got naked it was BOOM. Boom blow job. Boom pussy eating. No slow buildup. No discussion about what she wanted him to do with his mouth. No slow handjob edging of his cock. No discussion about his masturbation fantasies -- What did he think about, Whom did he think about? Did he watch porn? What kinds? What were his favorite genres?
Three stars.