All Comments on 'Jonos & the Whore Queen Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the genre trappings, looking forward to more.

Don't stop now!

Your best work yet! I can't wait for the sequel.

Simply one of the best erotic stories I've ever read. I have never left a comment on a story before, but after reading this one I felt compelled to.

Ok,seriously this is one of the best if not the best story i read yet.

Using sword&sorcery in incest stories is so rare and i was afraid that this story will be just another fast paced,poorly written short story.

I am glad that is NOT the case,i hope this will become a bigger adventure in which all of your readers can enjoy.

You have a way with words that is for sure.

"Her dark eyes which give her away as a Princess of the far off lands of Elysiis" -Like reading a proper book (Conan lore),information is presented in a way that fuels imagination and after a while i got hooked.

And the sex is hot!

PS.Make sure everyone understands that since she is a sorceress being 50years old means nothing since her magic is keeping her look young (personally i hope that statement will be confirmed)

Looking forward to reading more of your work in this setting,so far you are

doing great but you know that already.Bye

Forgot-added you to favorite authors immediately...

My hats off to you sir.What a start to get the story rolling.

This just might be a start of grand adventure between the years when the oceans drank Atlantis in an age undreamed of!

Please continue!

A fantastic work of art of pure eroticism, please continue this story.

You truly are a master.

Amazing story - interesting characters, good story, hot sex. The werewolf bit was really inventive.

This story rocks!! More on the same theme please!!!

M WAITING FOR THE SECOND PART ..WRERWOLF PART WAS NICE AND ANAL WAS A TREAT ,,,,BUT WOULD HAVE LOVED INITIAL RELUCTTANCE FROM THE MOTHER ...SORT OF A RAPE WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE....

This story is so much fun,i loved it.Please don't leave this one,it has so much potential.Write more chapters,pleeease.

Forget the other stuff you're writing this is the Master Piece

Go Ahabscribe we believe in you! Will your way out of writers block and write more of Jonos and his lusty queen.

I have to agree with syd_v63 forget the other stories, I was hooked on Mother & son until I read this one.

Absolutely fantastic storytelling. The buildup was excellent and the incest was a bonus. Please keep on writing.

Hi Ahabscribe,

This is excellent, excellent, excellent!!!

Waiting to see more and more pieces of art in this series!

Thanks!

I know there is a lot of readers waiting for another Jonos story.

Please hurry and give us another dose of sword,sex and fantasy.Please.

Another chapter.This story is so good it would be a shame not to continue with those characters.

This one is a rare breed indeed :-)

Ps.something similar got posted with ShyChiWriter-Affliction.But somehow the Conan lore is more appealing to me.Cheers!

Ahabscribe FTW,if you have the will there is a way!Let the adventure continue

Please continue. This is your best so far. If possible, go a little slow in mother's seduction. Slow seduction, followed by rape, followed by submission... that'd make this even more delicious.

Chapter 2 -- Please?

Where's the continuation of this magnificent story?

I'm sure all your fans would love to read more of Jonos and his Whore Queen.

This post is just to let you know that you are great.Please continue this wonderful story!

Good googly moogly! Now that is how Howard would have written it without the damn censors!

What a wonderful story.I agree with others,please write mooore.

I just read that you will post more chapters of Jonos.Thank you,this story is becoming my favorite,read it twice.

Bye!

just read this and was truly impressed, you have elevated the genre

i supremely hope to see another chapter.

FUCK! This was damn juicy! Great job...Peeping Tom here....I love your damn universe! Bring on the book! :-P How in the hell am I suppose to type after this! HELL, I'll just submit the damn stars...You're a fucking genius! Thanks for the fantasies! It's your universe and I don't want to leave...hell do I have time to shower before work?

wow great story, cant wait to read the second part, hopefully more after that one

The story is awesome. Both parts of it. I wonder if you would do a followup ?

The portrayal of the queen and the sex with werewolf were amazing to say the least.

Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really great story, different for me but I loved it because it is so well written. Getting ready to read Chapter 2 now!

With it were more common at literotica...

I have tremendous affection for this story. It's sexy and well written but crucially it was the story that first introduced me to the work of Ahabscribe...the Don of incest stories. Sadly, he no longer writes for Literotica, but his work will be remembered and adored by many of us throughout the ages.

Still my favorite and worthy of more volumes!

This is the first folklore type story I have read and find it amazingly enjoyable. 5 stars.