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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"Jordyn: So what, are you and your friend's boyfriends in this frat or something?"

Haven't you ever read a book and learned that this is not how you write dialogue? You're not writing a script and this is the most basic stuff..

"Jordyn said, "So what? Are you and your friend's boyfriends in this frat or something?"

All numbers under 100 must be written out, i.e., "five feet". Also, women aren't nearly as obsessed with bra cup sizes as you seem to think they are.

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