All Comments on 'Kate Spends Time with Her Family'

by SEAWATER1

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36FF_Tiki36FF_Tikiabout 11 years ago
loved this

I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. Just trying to figure out the order to read the others. I am wondering where you are going with the 14 yr old cousin, if i have the right one. I had to laugh out loud when she grabbed the bottle and acted like she passed out. I DID THAT!! oh my god i laughed so hard. I was not with family though i was with a friends boyfriend and she came in and i did that. Anyway great story lots of great sex. none too big but nice flow. Very arousing and i enjoyed it immensely.

SatsuSatsuabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

Excellent story and so well written. I hope this isn't the end for Kate and her family. I kinda think her mom has a good idea what's going on and just waiting to join in, I really hope I am right on this and you find time to write another chapter.xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Can only say keep this going please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very few grammar typo's

I noticed a few grammar typo's throughout the whole story, around 2-3 like the He's and She's and stuff, be sure to look at that, but AWESOME STORY!<3

kaidmankaidmanalmost 11 years ago
dynamite

I loved your series please continue its very hot read

bobenjoys183bobenjoys183almost 11 years ago
More please

Waiting for the next hot addition to your stor

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
Like wow !

Kate really is an individual creature isn't she?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Your stories re HOT! Keep them coming - love the "pushing the limits" - my 2 kids do too.

redking2882redking2882almost 4 years ago
ugh

i like this story but i honestly wanted them to tie up kate's mom and aunt susan and fuck in front of them or at the very least remind them what sex is supposed to be (fun). those two women nearly killed the story with how over bearing they were.

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...