All Comments on 'Keena and Gabe'

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nmwpleasernmwpleaserover 2 years ago

Sure hope there is more to this. Don't leave us hanging in limbo.....how about a chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The premise started interesting, but then you had a church accountant having to travel out of town. Why? Then you had a couple so controlled by their religious beliefs they could not talk about sex, but they had wine readily available for supper?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The travel thing was odd but some of these big churches do travel as a part of a bigger umbrella. As for wine... well, all is well there. Loved this storey. Definitely needs to continue down the rabbit hole.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

That rare combo of good story and hot spank material. 5 stars. On to part 2

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