All Comments on 'Kelli Ch. 07'

Thanks, Harry. All the loose ends were tied up and there were some interesting surprises. That being said, it did seem like there was an unusual amount of plot moves put into a few pages.

In any event, looking forward to the next adventure.

Another great story, thanks so much for all of your stories and for sharing them with us.

Most of my favorite stories here are the long, multi-part stories that create a vibrant world and characters with some depth. Don't hold back from the longer tales if the story calls for it. This was a fun one, but the end just seemed a bit rushed.

It’s not an absurd number ! A good story with remarkable characters is never too long !

I have to agree with NuhNuh. All of your stories have kept me coming back for more and not wanting them to end. This one was another example of that. Thank you for the great stories and please keep them coming.

The worst thing about a great story is that eventually it has to end.

5 Stars from me !