by X-Factor
This may be the best chapter yet in this exceptional saga; beautifully written, passionate, and deeply moving, this is a love story that really touches the heart. How everything is going to be resolved in the end is puzzling, leaving the reader eager to find out. Five stars.
Wonderful story as usual! My only concern is when he's fucking her pussy right after his dick was in her ass. Not sure if you don't know or forgot or just plain didn't care but that's not recommended unless you're doing a porn shoot because the vagina can get an infection from all the bacteria and what not from the ass so yeah
Great story as always, but the one problem i have with it is that after having anal you aren't supposed to fuck a pussy without cleaning the dick/toy first or changing condoms because of bacteria. Not sure if you didn't know or care or just plain forgot but yeah that's it
I'm aware, and was cognizant. He did wipe his dick in between the two positions. I just didn't write about it because it would disrupt the flow.
"He got off the bed, grabbed a cloth and wiped his shaft thoroughly. Then, dropping the cloth on the floor, he climbed back onto the bed and shuffled forward." - tends to lose the reader's momentum. Keep that in mind for all my stories. Sometimes I mention the wiping, sometimes I don't. But pretend it always happens. ;)
Ok thanks I get it. Sorry for the double post. The 1st one took so long to be posted so then I rewrote it. Hope you won't think in overbearing or something like that😁