All Comments on 'Kitten In Heat Ch. 02'

Please do not resubmit part 1 with the title of part 2 and waste my time rereading the original story. unless you add new subject to the submission it is still pat 1.

Confusion reigns...I almost didn't read it....same as what the last commenter wrote

Just wondering how this chapter is any different than the first one? Because I didn't read about anything new.

You've padded the latter parts out a litle, but to what end? It's still the same first part!

It was just a padded out version of part one..i was pissed because i was so excited for something new

things like this are very disconcerting to people who actually read your stories rather than skimming through to the wet parts:

"In a non-descript neighborhood in a non-descript subdivision a woman who was the feeling very opposite of non-descript was stirring around her admittedly non-descript one story ranch home.

Katherine "Kitty" Clark was downstairs in the family kitchen making breakfast."

one story ranch... downstairs kitchen... your story is full of stuff like this.

also, you used the word non-descript four times in one really poorly written sentence. i understand the effect you were going for but its spoiled by the really egregious grammatical error right in the middle of it. and if it's so non-decript... why bother describing it?

you can do better.

Too many He Thought and She Thoughts to bother continuing.

Still not worth a minute of anyones time.

While I was a little disappointed not to see a new chapter, I really enjoyed the more fleshed out scenes. I still look forward to another chapter.

I like this rewrite better and I hope you continue the story!

this is not a chapter 2 but a REWRITE of the same chapter learn the difference

Please continue this series!!