All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 01'

Great beginning, can't wait for more chapters

Great start.

Interesting beginning!

5

Unsympathetic yet sympathetic character at the same time, well done

The hooker blues…..

3/5 thus far, see where the story goes.

On a good track... waiting :))

Mc needs more development. 3 stars right now. Need to understand what put the Mc on this path.

A very strong start. She’s one hell of a complex character.

The "soiled dove" on steroids route. I like it.

It is always a thrill to see a new story posted by you. They are well written with interesting characters and a joy to read. Thanks for your hard work and for sharing with us.

Finger crossed 4stars

Lovely beginning. Looks like another wonderful story to go with all your others.

Good story telling...as usual. You're a very good writer/author.

5+++++stars!

Very well written.

Tess (uk)

Fabulous introduction. Lots of possibilities and interesting characterisation. Good pacing too.

Your writing is always good and is getting even better. Thanks.