All Comments on 'Lazing Naked on a Sunny Day'

Mmm you certainly have a way with words very sensual erotic had me rubbing my clit .

A great first story on Literotica,welcome to the site.

Katrina

Great Job. Superb continuity and content, very erotic. I too like your male counter part enjoy watching my lady cum. It is so exciteing. My lady enjoys being watched and how hard it makes me. Keep up the good work. More soon Please.

Loved it - cannot wait to read your next submission!

Very nicely written. Good pace, fun, believable erotic tension between the characters. Keep writing!

Such a great start, extremely steamy and very well written. Hope theres more to come (;

This was a very hot and sexy story with a lot of detailed sex. Great job and good luck in the contest.

Incredible first story, well written, characters you can get into, and lots of hot sticky sex. I hope you write many more. Best of luck in the contest.

For a first story, you have the artist's touch.

Always gives me a boner to watch someone masturbating,

and you captured the feeling perfectly.

Thanks for giving me a wet tummy! :)

/Per

It just got cooler this week... but I'm already missing those hot DC days. Thanks for the heat.

I enjoyed this story and found it very erotic. I'm surprised that you haven't written more.

This is absolutely fantastic. It's sexy but not depraved. God knows how rare that is on this site. I really enjoyed it and I believe that of all the stories I have read on this site this one might jut be my favorite.

Gawd I loved this. I’ve been stroking the entire time and came twice, picturing every bit of this - Awesome writing. Can’t wait to read more of your submissions