All Comments on 'Leo Goes into the Wrong Bedroom'

There could be some more sexy adventures with this family depending on where they go and hopefully without Dad.

This was great, and there should be more in the future !

I am.......

I will......

People don't say that, they say I'm and I'll etc.

Story! Which promises much more fun for the family!

Threesomes then a foursome

Everybody had a good time.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Very well done. I don't know if they will find another place like that again😁

Please continue with the next chapter. And please admit that Mary knew what was going on the whole time since she was not really asleep the whole time and actually was spying on Leo the entire time.

But I do get sick of authors calling a pussy a cunt. To me it's a derogatory term used to call a woman who is a scum of the earth whore. You don't have enough money to pay me to fuck a slut cunt. A sweet pussy is NOT A cunt!!!

I don't get all the favorable comments. The dialogue in this is truly appalling. No one - NO ONE - speaks the way your characters do.

Also, WAY overwritten.

Honestly, did you not get that his family and it's author are from one of the Queen's countries? I'd guess that chris99999 is English. They do use a different speech style than the U.S. does. A clue might be that mom and dad are referred to as "Mother and Father"? Not typical U.S. English.

Ansdguy

I don't understand the poor reviews, so what if he calls it a cunt, l do understand your point about the derogatory side but during sex l think it's quite acceptable to talk dirty, l for one love the the term cunt, it really helps to set the mood, l can't talk for anyone else but l think by using the word slut in association with cunt, then arnt you being derogatory? If so then l would have to be the biggest slut ever along with most every other male on this planet, we are animals, we are here for procreation then death! You cant label someone with a name then call that name bad or what they are doing as bad if thats whats they are meant to do😉 it's called sowing your wild oats, do you think this should only be privileged to males? If females didn't do it then us males couldn't. Don't discourage people just because they do or say things differently than you👍

Sorry im not trying to upset anyone, lm just trying to give you somthing to think about.

I gave it 5 stars .. I really liked it ...

I enjoy the stories of Chris99999 but I do think his use of the word cunt is way over used! And yes, it is derogatory! And I am from the..Queens country!! Cunny, pussy, love hole, any of those are way way more acceptable than the hard sounding cunt!! For someone to always try to force the female especially a mother to actually say ...fuck me in the cunt...for me is most definitely off putting! Yes sex should be enjoyed but reaching into disrespect and depravity is not enjoying sex for the vast majority of people! I gave five points for the overall story, but it could have been even more enjoyable!!

Would love to see the whole family involved, except father/husband on the next vacation.

Wifeys part kinda sucked.. the pretending to be his sister was hot..besides that.. shes the boringest one there.. the guy made out.. every guys fantasy fulfilled

If I had known that it was that easy, I would have fucked my mom and my sister years ago. I'll let you know if it works....... Wish me luck!

Sister? Wife? Too confusing. Couldn't get past half a page. 1*

I agree with the comments about ‘cunt’.

In Britain it is rarely used to describe a pussy, it is the worst of the swear words to describe an obnoxious person much like ‘motherfucker’ in American films.

Britons normally call the vagina a ‘pussy’ or ‘fanny’.

I understand that American use of fanny is not used in the same way.

It does disturb me slightly to read cunt used relentlessly but we have to acknowledge that the majority of the authors are American. However British writers seem to be emulating them.

I hate that word. To me it's a cheap put down, NOTHING erotic about it. It's like calling a guy a wimp pussy. A gay guy might like it.

I give it a 5 even if it did stretch the bounds of reality

And another fanfuckintastic story, Chris. My old timers disease has kicked in and knew I had you tagged, but found you and going to your list and to my GF place and have some fun. 5*, but I’m sure you knew

Oooohhhh...the comments here...

"Cunt"...yes, that usually causes people quite a bit of anxiety, because of the negative connotation to it. In fact, it was the cause of a disagreement at work and I left the job. And, it would appear this author be British...which means the use of "cunt" is quite acceptable as a name for the female genitalia...

The comments about this usage are, maybe, acceptable and understandable, under the circumstances. HOWEVER...it would really be appreciated if some of the more 'inflammafory' ones be kept unsaid...???? They really are not 'constructive' to the story, or other aspects of this discussion...

There, I said it...

The rest of the story...FANTASTIC!D I love it, the 'family's aspect is very appealing to me...would be interesting to involve Mary (wife) next time??

Five**5**Stars!!

Would be nice to read more about next trip and to see if wife gets involved more and what the girls talk about.

There several ways this story can go hope you do a sequel with a nice suprise

This story was very good looking forward for a sequel