All Comments on 'Lesbian Induction'

Language a little florid, but still on the edge of believable. Needs a through copy edit; run-on sentences, misplaced commas, etc. But solid writing and a really hot story.

I often think the world would be a better place if more young men and women were "taken in hand" by older, more experienced lovers

Good story with part 2 to come. Needs a good proofreading though. She seems to be Sammi at first and Amanda later on!

I mean, really. What was wrong with "Me and my Girls Ch. 03" the first time around?

somthing strange is going on here. I thought id read this years ago, and i had.

with changed names.

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-new-world-deeper-in?page=2

But then again, I've a soft spot for your writing anyway.

And the dejavu feelings? They show that your stories can leave such an impression on our memories!

(Nice to see you revisiting one of my fav. subjects :-)

R.

I thoroughly enjoyed your autobiographical story. What I loved the best was your descriptive touch which makes your characters real! I felt like I was a real voyeur and found myself holding my breath so as to not interrupt them.

Thanks again. I will be reading more.

Brooke (Brookell on Lit)