by AshmitaMadhukar
It is nice to see a good quality incest series written . The setting against the rural Indian backdrop is what makes this series interesting. Hoping for more parts in this series.
Best pleasure is when FIL's monster enter DIL'S pussy
Once open 'hole' will search for other 'snakes'
In long time i came across this well written series of erotic stories.
I congratulate you on your great writing skills.
I am sure it’s imaginary only.
Keep writing don’t stop & don’t make us wait so long.
I was checking everyday for your new story.
Keep it up 👍🏼Tok1a
Very good storywriting,loved every bit of it . As usual deserves more than 5 stars ..
Are you going to continue this series or stopping it ?
Please check your private messages .
For correlating more with the background of ur story u hv made this submission more of a bad word mouthed story with an incest theme . I felt l am reading on 'indian sex stories' not on Literotica . There was no eroticness in it. if u are an Indian u will understand this comparison ...the difference between bhojpuri movie n Bollywood though they use usually the same family drama theme
It was so hot reading about the intertwined love and lust of both FIL& DIL. Your style of writing was also awesome. So descriptive. Low simmering and then final boil. Don't stop now dear. What would be more awesome how they would interact during the next day with people around. What will go through their hearts, minds and cock & pussy. How will they hide the hickey would be fun to read. Also the sexual tension during the day would be too hot to read. And then how they will explode the next night.
I am not a fan of Incest themed stories, but man this was too good. Wondering what will be next a threesome or cuckolding?
I always love your writing. Especially when there's love n lust in incest. Local dialect always makes it erotic Further I like your depiction of subtle dominance with love, not with rashness. Expecting your next chapter on this very soon..... I've not commented on any of the literotica stories till date. But, this time I had this inner urge to just let you know that I loved this series
Mixing emotion with sex. The best storytelling I have ever seen !! Loved this chapter.
Keep it up.
i am overwhelmed by ur writings. u r great. i lived it
The best ever narration I'm thoroughly enjoying it , also the fact that its been authored by a couple makes the facts much more interesting.
Am 60, with a joint family living in India , hence co relating what you have written to reality- its so well written the way you have woven relationship within Indian families..the description of sex in Indian terms is so arousing.
I must compliment you for bringing out the lusty feelings of Sonam who was having listless bland sex with her hubby and transforming her into a wanton fully aroused women wanting to explore her sexuality with her manly virile dominating yet understanding farther in law.
I have given 5 starts , which is a under rating.
I must caution you bringing in the nephew may only complicate the story as Balwant gets jealous etc.
Safer you stick to your strengths be erotic get kinkier. Introduce ancient sex sculptures ..move into more sexual sensuous sensual zones.
My compliments once again.
Wow... master of the house fucks his sons wife without worrying about him?! And she allows him to enjoy her! They don't even think it's sin to do like this... well, if the opportunity is there... their natural urge can't wait for anyone I guess. Even, they can't even wear a condom. They must be like, 'if you're bout to do a bad thing, then do it right'.