All Comments on 'Lightning Strike'

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SlofredSlofredover 2 years ago

As much as I love jets and working on them ,, this story is just a step too deep into the uncanny vally.

FondofLegsFondofLegsover 2 years ago
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That was an entertaining story. Certainly gives a new meaning to aircraft servicing.

Good thing "she" wasn't an A-10 with seven barrels to satisfy :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I enjoyed it.

GadenKerenskyGadenKerenskyover 2 years agoAuthor

Maybe a sequel one day. Have to be in the mood for these sorts of stories.

xtra123xtra123over 2 years ago

That was different… and in this case different was a very good read. Definitely need to find out what happens to humans who “partner” with Dires over an extended period of time… 😉

GadenKerenskyGadenKerenskyover 2 years agoAuthor

There's actually detailed information on what happens to humans who do that, @xtra123

The Dire Machines, as indicated in the foreword disclaimer, are the creation of Ratbat, and she has quite detailed information on that.

Reality4Reality4over 2 years ago

Well at this point I'm convinced you could write about anything and make it seem very, very hot. Nice job, I'm happy to be reading these new stories ^^

MrmentalMrmentalover 2 years ago

Ok damn. That was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow this is weird. I'm guessing Ratbat chose the name from the Transformers character. Talk about referring to a plane or ship as "she"!

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