All Comments on 'Lindsey'

by OrdinaryGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Ooo Girl

She can sit on my lap anytime!!

More please.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Just One More Line

She could have said- "Thank you, Daddy"

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Is this every older man's fantasy?

...oh, yeah. The sex was well-paced, but fast, leaving me wanting more. But then, isn't that always true?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Well...

...That was impressive.

The scene unfolded quickly enough to carry the air of excitement throughout, but remained detailed enough for some very vivid imagery. Good work, OrdinaryGirl!

There's also much merit, I think, in a reversed situation: a younger man and a slightly older woman. Say, 8 years' difference, or so?

*sly wink*

skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Course it is....

every old man's fantasy, which is why I read it and enjoyed it. Not that I'm all that old - but I once shook hands with Noah just after the flood.

MrKnowitallMrKnowitallover 19 years ago
Keeping it up...

I think the best part of all OG's stories are the orgasms... you can almost feel them.

duke11duke11over 18 years ago
Okay

Story goes pretty good but ends too quickly. Keep the story going.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 14 years ago
Very hot.

Every man's fantasy, described in an extraordinary way by Ordinary Girl!

Sman4444Sman4444about 6 years ago
Great Story

Based on this story and your beautiful picture - you're definitely not an ordinary girl!

Very erotic for such a short story well done - keep writing - can't wait read your other stories now.

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