All Comments on 'Little One Meets Her One'

Oh my my my !!!! What to say except for please say you willbe adding more sooon.

... for this marvellous story! It was quite superb, five-star material, and I look forward to reading more of tara's journey to submissiveness.

Cant wait to read more of tara's journey into submission. Very well written.

but you need to edit better or ask someone you trust to proof read. There are some distracting spelling/grammar errors, and at one point Trey took Tara's coat, but in the next paragraph he asked her to remove it. Those type of mistakes interrupt the flow of a good tale.

On the other hand, the characters are appealing, the ideas are good, the pacing is strong with an excellent build up. I like the mini chapters you are using, and am looking forward to reading the next 2 installments.

Sometimes i do miss a few things here and there. Sorry about that. i do have an editor now...and hopefully those kind of mistakes are caught.