by sadmiss
Good start. It will be interesting to see, how far his control will take them. How submissive he will make her!
Family members who are stepfamily are not incest and really should be in another category. Persons who read incest stories want to hear about family fucking family, not the add-ins unless it's an orgy.
Sad Miss, hpy story.
It would be even happier with Proof Reading.
BTW, your story length is ideal.
People saying that step siblings aren't incest are forgetting that it also falls under taboo. There is still a family dynamic involved that is usually considered off limits, even though they aren't related by blood.
And good story. In my opinion it could use a little more polish and personality here and there, but its basically solid.
Great start, can't wait for more. These two could have a lot of fun together. Maybe next chapter he can Penetrate her with his cock. Just hope he's as good with that as he is with his fingers..