All Comments on 'Lizzie Comforts Her Step-Dad'

Quite a few loose ends. Do they continue the tryst? What about her mother? It could certainly use a second chapter to wrap things up.

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex.

i like the story - as a first chapter. great opening, clever plot. but clearly it needs 2-3, maybe 4 more chapters!!! great great start.

He should dump his slut wife and start a new life with his step daughter.

Is “Daddy” married to Lizzie’s Mother? If so, what Daddy and Lizzie did was very illegal, and can be used against him when and if they Divorce.

Does Lizzie really want her parents to break-up? She loves her Mother. But, obviously, there was something lacking emotionally and physically for Mom, which is why she let Jackson come sniffing around again. What was missing? Here’s a guess: Mom’s a prude. Especially around her daughter. But she doesn’t want to be treated like a prude. She has a deep desire to be treated like a slut, like a prostitute even, especially like a submissive in the bedroom. She doesn’t want to be a straight-laced Priss, not anymore.

So, how can Lizzie and Daddy tell Mom? There are lots of solutions to that one!

Questions for future chapters: Will Lizzie become Daddy’s Primary? Will Lizzie and Daddy make Mommy their sub, their slut? Will this be a romantic, one-on-one Love Story, or Incestuous, Kinky Porn?! Will Lizzie seduce and dominate her mother, and put on a Lesbian Revenge-Fuck Show for Daddy? That would require Lizzie getting a strap-on, maybe some other accessories . But, she’s eighteen and motivated to keep her Mother in her life, and keep the Family’s Finances as a unit, so she can attend college to become a nurse, teacher, librarian, prison guard, or counselor. Lizzie also wants to see her Mother happy, safe, and fulfilled. If Mom comes home from Jackson’s with bruises, a concussion, or a wrenched shoulder (because Jackson’s a rough, abusive alcoholic), Lizzie and Daddy will be motivated to protect her, maybe even redeem her.

So many ways this can play out. You’ve decided to be very sweet, tender, and romantic in this chapter. I hope future chapters stay romantic and motivated by love, but that the Sex gets nastier, and kinkier.

He gets a sexy 18yo want to have sex and the first thing h e does is want a vibrator. I must be in the wrong generation. Perhaps after a few weeks of sex they could try kinks.

You write well, but our ideas of sex vary too much.

Great story. Keep it up. Hope that there is more to come.

Ok, His wife is out whoring around, he's not going to confront her, just go after the daughter? What a waste, it's called character development, and it could have gave us a few work with. Maybe part 2 is in the chute?

I agree with Dunkirk, dump the wife and keep the stepdaughter. The story however needs more to be complete.

So, He didn't confront his wife? Finish it!

Great story and a really sweet plot . When is the final chapter

coming. Left hanging like this really sucks .