All Comments on 'Lizzie's Picnic Surprise'

Hope you enjoyed this short story. It is an entry for the Summer Lovin' 2020 contest so if you feel like leaving a comment and rating, I really would appreciate it.

Hope there will be more.

Oh Stevie, Stevie, Stevie; get ready. Lizzie is getting ready to rock your world.

Thanks for sharing!

Very good story that cries out for another chapter. Or two!

would love to see more from this great couple. but noticed "The End" sad but still a great story.

Didn't feel any passion in the story, A lot of great descriptive actual sex, but lacked the detail leading to the act itself.

I thought this story was one of the best I had yet read on Literotica.

The first paragraph had me hooked and the story rolled out from there.

Thanks for sharing.