All Comments on 'Lonely One'

I'm not usually in to mother/son incest, but this one was really good. Thanks for your story. Give us more.

Good job...there is NOTHING better than mother/son sex stories............

A good story, and a good theme. Mother and son sex is the best, especially when mom is a cock slut. Makes me think of a lot of good scenarios you could develop for more stories. Thanks for the post....Rich

but your execution was terrible. You need to learn a bit of writing skills, such as how to use quote marks for quoting what someone is actually saying. Learning things like the difference between "to" and "too" is important for good writing. You might make use of the literotica volunteer editors, they could do wonders for your story.

Sorry, I tried to follow your story because it seemed like it was going to be hot... but the glaring errors turned me off right away and I couldn't finish.

but good otherwise.

You ned to use them when people are speaking in your stories.

Rookie mistake? Maybe. But that's my advice.

are NOT optional, which is something you should have learned by the time you were eight -- ten at the latest.

get an editor!

This started off really good, then you revealed that the mother was 65 years old. Maybe a small group of people would find this sexy, but I suspect for most people (and especially me), it is a huge turn off. I think "65" and I think bi-focals, knitting, and hearing aids. Maybe that is prejudiced, but in my erotic fiction I don't want to be reading about people in their 60s.

I tried to enjoy the rest of the story, pretending the characters were a teenager and his 30/40 year-old mother, but it just didn't work. Not for me.

Loved the story. As for me it went to fast at the beging. Needed more teasingan flirting. Do Love this type of story line. mom/ son is the best. Thanks

Great story! Grammer and punctuation experts are much easier to come by than great story tellers. If you need some help in that area.. ask for it. There are lots of folks who are happy to assist!

John

Please write a sequel asap.

I liked best that when the boy was sticking his prick up her cunt he yelled, "I'm Fucking Mommy, I'm Fucking Mommy!"

Hot is the only way to describe this! This is also what makes pantyhose so hot. Please continue to write. A sequel would be nice, but a series would be even better!

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who cares how old the mother is. That hole between her legs is still the hole the son came out of. Like with plenty of young guys, it's his favorite cunt in the whole wide world, the cunt he most wants to blow his balls up into. It's just natural.

The writing was mediocre, the grammar and word usage worthy of a grade schooler and at 65, the attraction is suspect at best. Not a worthy effort. Too little care given to expressing the meager ideas here. I didn't care because the author did not seem to either.

come over for diner (dinner)

not to sure about anything (too)

dating was her big draw back (drawback)

She was (-an) at home

who ever I served his wine too (whomever) (to)

I had nothing to loose (lose)

The hem line (hemline)

Mom turns her ass to me and asks me were (where)

I will be rite back (right)

I watched her ass wiggled (wiggle)

I think there gone (they’re)

gentle squeeze rite at her butt hole (butthole)

I continued to fondled her ass (fondle)

Joining her out in the middle of the living room (-and) she pulled

she grabbed a hand full (handful)

throwing her to the ground and rapping her (raping)

As (I) helped her into my truck

I was harder then nails (than)

The cotton gusset of her pantyhose were soaked (was)

fondled each other's ass's (asses)

mom you would notice these things about your siblings (children)

she move her ass to the edge (moved)

started (-to) oozing it's way out (its)

how much (I) wanted to taste her pussy

how much wanted to taste her pussy

She was naked except (for) her pantyhose

she couldn't stop cuming (cumming)

no problem what so ever (whatsoever)

her re-cooperating a little (recuperating)

The pools of liquid in her eyes were proof that she was hornier then hell (WHY WOULD YOU SAY THIS?) (than)

she indulged her self with my prick (herself)

Bra's are optional (Bras)

Her finger tips tickled (fingertips)

slowly holing the tip of my dick (holding)

While your doing that (you’re)

This was not what she wanted to here. (hear)

After reading this story again, almost, 6 years later, to the day(!), I still think that it's HOT! I agree, to a certain extent, that Grammar is Grammar, and, also, to a certain extent, it took something away from the story. However, and back to the title of this submission / Comment, one thing that a lot of people missed, especially those "Stuck in the 60s", is that you told everyone that she has the body of a 40 year old. Either way, keep writing, and we'll, certainly, keep reading!

Nice story but hard to read with all the misspelled words.it might help to learn to phrase a sentance.also they do make stockings with garter belts so you do not have to RIP them all the time.thigh thighs also. Kip

Wow! That is a very hot story, grammar and spelling notwithstanding. Those who comment negatively about a 65 year old woman have no idea what they are talking about--must be a young guy with little experience with older women. Parts of this story are so real to me and deeply arousing. My mother was about 57 years and I was 35 when she and I were talking one day, She just outright asked me what aroused me sexually. I had recently gone through a divorce and was frustrated. I was a little embarrassed by that question. There are many things that arouse me. One of them is a woman wearing sheer pantyhose--nude-to-the-waist with a sheer nylon see-through crotch and no panties. I love to see a woman's pussy through her pantyhose and I love a full bush on her. So, I told her. We dropped that discussion. I recall sniffing her panties when I was a teen. I knew what she smelled like and it was very good! But, a couple of years later, mom and I were on a road trip together to her alma mater. We shared a motel room with separate beds. One day, in the room, she started taking off her clothes, and she stood in front of me in pantyhose with no panties. I nearly fainted! "Is this what you like?" she asked. There she stood in her pantyhose without panties! Her pussy hair was abundant with grey and light brown a result of years of growth. Her pussy lips were full and mashed against the sheer nylon and it was soaking wet. "Oh, Mom!" was all I could get out. She said, "My pussy is wet and I need a man." When I heard her say, "...my pussy..." I again was shocked, I had never heard her say anything like that. When she said, "pussy," I almost came in my pants. She walked over to her bed stretched out on it, and opened her legs and asked, "What are you waiting for?" One cannot begin to imagine what that felt like. The juiciest, hairiest, wide-open pulsing, throbbing pussy.

I used to get wet making my son hard. I knew he sniffed my worn underwear and got off with my scent. I loved being the object if his desire. I often sat on our couch and leaned against the arm rest with a dress or skirt on and wore no panties. I would raise my knees with my feet on the couch and read novels. He would come and sit on the other end and pretend to read facing me while looking up my skirt at my bare kitty. I would act like I was so engrossed with my reading that I was oblivious to anything else. After about 10 minutes, he would get up and head to the bathroom. I knew what he was doing. He would come back and sit there again, and repeat this a couple of times. I would get so wet knowing he found me attractive and that I could stimulate and arouse him that way. After an hour or so I would have to go to my bedroom and do the same thing.

The first time I visited in the home of my future mother-in-law I went to the bathroom and noticed pantyhose hanging all over it. She had washed them and hung them up to dry. I imagined her pulling on a pair of her pantyhose and what she would look like with nothing else on. She was a tall voluptuous woman with long slim legs and big fine breasts. I can see her thick-haired pussy mashed against the sheer nylon. Later, I asked my fiance' to start wearing sheer pantyhose without panties. I would lick her pussy through her pantyhose, and get her dripping wet, then pull them off and fuck her. My Mom did the same thing. Having the women in my life wearing sheer pantyhose and knowing their pussies could be seen easily with just a flash of open legs was very erotic, and still is. I well remember my Mom (usually in a restaurant) often saying, "That man is trying to look up my skirt!" My wife has given a lot of men a view of her pussy that way. As a high school teacher she has flashed her pantyhose-covered pussy at some of her male students and given them moments of sexual excitement when they look up her skirt--of course it is "accidental." She enjoys telling me about it and it enhances our sex life.

Just feedback to other readers:

Great story - loved that sexy mom was so ready for him and that she discovered her love of sucking cock (very hot). But I hope she remembers it. She had at least 10 glasses of whine in about 4 hours - maybe 12 if it was 2 (not 1) before he got there and 4 (not3) at the restaurant. Tons of grammar issues but it is a very sexy flow.

May I suggest that you add some categories such as "pantyhose" so your story will show up during searches.

I know a 67 year old woman who is very sexy and beautiful. She has great tits with nipples that still get hard and erect when she is hot. Her pussy drips with a river of juice; she has a thick full bush, and is as tight as a virgin and fun to fuck. She wears sheer pantyhose without panties and opens her shapely legs to flash her hot pussy. She loves to have her pussy licked and has intense orgasms. A real man won't let a woman like that be neglected.