by Texican1830
I love the way this story keeps rolling along with new elements showing up in every chapter. As much as I enjoy seeing a good tale reach its conclusion, this one holds the interest so well that I am not looking for the final chapter yet. 5 stars again!
Love the detail, in many ways it seems to be a full novel. Excellent instalment, wonder what happened to Demon and friends?
Loving the series but this chapter fell flat for me. Endless dialogue that never really moved the plot lines forward. Fives pages of fluff to setup Annika almost falling again and then Erik. Ugh! 4.1*
I'm sorry but this chapter made me realize that every chapter is about the same, names changed, locations, bad guys, etc, etc,,, but it's all the same Eric and Annika fighting off the Rapists and bad guys. Nothing changes. Same shit just different location, same bad guys trying to fuck Hanna or Annika!
Just let Annika get raped already so Erik can move on to a normal chick that’s not putting herself in the same situation over and over and over again
Maybe I'm into stories more than just sex but I enjoyed this segment. Like another commenter I wonder what happened to the Football Douchebags! Anyway you still have me hooked!
Cheers
SAGE
Sorry, but compared to the other chapters this was very bland. Nowhere near your normal standard.