All Comments on 'Looking But Never Finding Pt. 02'

by Silver Sea

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great Story

Really enjoying this story and hope it continues for a few more chapters. The only thing I wish to mention is that the names occasionally get mixed up, but hey I can live with that.

Thanks and stay safe

Rgds Al

Silver SeaSilver Seaabout 3 years agoAuthor
Mixing the names.. damn

Mixing the names.. damn!!!

Thanks for pointing that out.

Sorry readers!!!!

I will try to be more careful in the coming chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great chapter! It is getting really intense between those two. I hope Elizabeth stay Natalie’s pet and doesn’t become a mistress to some random guy. Natalie and Elizabeth are such a lovely couple.

I can’t wait for the coming chapters! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I like this, but no concept of limits, with the foot worship and anal licking. If she is too grossed out she should have a way of saying so. Well I guess safewords but it seems a bit lopsided and too much to be realistic.

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