All Comments on 'Loss of Amateur Status Pt. 01'

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amoroneamoronealmost 8 years ago
Well written

A very erotic and well written short story.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
loss of ameateur status

Cute!

KinkyAngel64KinkyAngel64almost 8 years ago

I enjoyed this story very much.

casannettecasannettealmost 8 years ago
Pubic?

Why would a middle aged woman trim her puibic hair? Who's she trying to impress?

Many writers think it's so important to have hair trimmed, or bald? Who gives a shit? Let the woman be natural ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well Done

What a truly talented writer you are. Wonderful story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
But You Sure As Hell

didn't lose your humor!!! Amatuer or pro, you scored well!

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
Well laid well paid

You laid her like you layed her patio, I will be back in a week to finish her up. I wood bet you answer your phone this time. Oh I've figured a couple uses for your ties

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
Sexy Story***

Thanks for the read.

salvatore31salvatore31about 6 years ago
Quick read.

Which means I never got bored.

"I would say there was probably a little too much sand in the bottom of the hour glass. She was just a little on the beamy side around the hips. There was an agreeable bosom that I would describe as generous without being substantial. I did have occasion to admire her legs. I think the phrase "well-turned" describes them nicely."

So original that I believed I was right there looking at this woman.

Be well.

RioRedKingRioRedKingalmost 6 years ago
cleverly done

light, entertaining and sexy. Great fun.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Loved it, short quick read, nicely thought out

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