All Comments on 'Lustful women IV, Harriet'

Tremendous. I love how each scene is back to back

It would have flowed much better if all the characters simply had names rather than generic descriptions.

It wasn't enjoyable, conceivable or worth reading. He'll that business would be illegal and unrealistic.

I think this story should be in the "Humor" section.

Yes, as soon as I started reading, I felt that English was not the writer's first language. Spelling and grammar give it away. Editing is advised, perhaps. But bravop for tackling it in English!

Story is long and messy. A lot of dialogue, but almost none from the boy who is ravishing his mother and others every 5 minutes. one could easily imagine he is a little 'light' mentally, but let's not be too critical. Some might criticise the 'reality' of stories on this site - but we are not here for realism. We are here for something different and erotic!