by sadhu213
All the comments this story deserve is: "Auuunhhh, ooommhhh, uuuhhhh"
Please get someone to help with your English before you venture into print.
You screwed up the ending. It was a really good story. Of course your grammar is way off
Very Nice story. i like it. there must be a second part of it with again forcing from prakash and resistance and finally submission from Madhu. and a forced anal also
i truly felt as if prakash did me. so much emotions and action. keep going
more chapters please! Consider adding anal, daily sex at the office with her boss and possibly other employees (men and women), exhibitionism (her boss buys her see-through sari & underwear to wear at work and out in public),and sex-filled business trips. Madhu should get pregnant.
Are their consequences? Please not another chuckhold story we get these all the time. Does she confess her affair to her husband and and ask for forgiveness. Does her boss blackmail her or does she continue until caught. Surely in India she must know what happen, can't happen again . Sure they must be payback? Divorce or two people coming could terms with what happened! I hope you work this story out . It easy to cheat it's harder to come to terms with your behavior
you rock go ahead and write some more on madhu's new found liberation
तिच्या नितंब व उरोजांना दाबायला प्रकाशला मजा आली असणार. त्याचा विशाल लंड आणि योनी चुंबनाने ती सुखावली व मग सुरु झाला संभोगाचा सिलसिला.
पराग व माझ्या बायकोने अषीच सुरवात केली व आज दोन वर्षे ते एकमेकांना सुख संभोग सुख देत आहेत.
would love to read more chapters. Madhu, her boss, and 2 other employees (a man and a woman, married but not to each other) could go on a business trip. The women get drunk and group sex ensues with DPs for both women, the women do ass-to-mouth (their own asses and each other's ass), lesbian sex, and exhibitionism by both women.
You have multiple stories with similar themes, but this one is your best, by far.
It's obvious the author is a non-English speaker and is in need of a good editor.
The plot is traditional: beautiful woman, horny boss, missing husband, horny wife, wine and whisky, dancing, fondling, resistance lost, fucked. Dialogue awkward, internal dialogue intermixed in long paragraphs, lack of secondary characters, awkward phrasing. While it was an interesting story it would have been much better and shorter with a good editor.
Very erotic story. Great build up and descriptive action and thoughts. Not being a primary English speaker adds to the eroticism.
The comments are Better than the stor, but Shang40 is the only one who makes sense.
@ 26thNC
Thanks.
The character Madhu and also in other stories like Meghana are all Ms and those ladies are blessed with hot Sexy body features.
There is another name Manisha. We are brahmin. She is my cousin in late 20s. Married @ 26 but deprived in sex since her hubby was sent abroad for full one year. Manisha got a job and her boss, actually a Muslim Shehnaj Khan.
He supported her in work and in one of the company party became her dance partner.
Manisha being deprived in sex allowed him to come closer and kissed during dance.
That night nothing happened but on a company tour they explored further sex journey.
Though a brahmin got taste of Muslim cock which gave her more sexual satisfaction than her hubby.
The bed affair continued and Shehnaj got her younger virgin sister in law also.